bikini beach …

bikini beach …

the phases

of the moon

 

(haiku, Julian O’Dea)

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2 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by Craig on June 23, 2016 at 5:28 pm

    or the faces of the moon
    or being mooned by hot chicks in thong bikinis. You can hear it calling out to you as they go by saying, “spank me!”

    Reply

  2. Posted by Roman Lance on June 23, 2016 at 8:42 pm

    I enjoyed the subtlety of your text, but if you will allow me to modify your poem with a bit of poetic license, I would change it thusly:

    bikini beach …

    (oh) the faces

    on the moons

    I get a small chuckle from that, though maybe you were aiming for a different implication.

    Anyway, I enjoy your blog.

    Reply

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