My bride

My bride stands on our 

honeymoon beach, wearing

only dabs of sand but with 

the whole ocean glistening 

in her eyes, and I can tell

that I am not alone beside 

the shore any more.


(Julian O’Dea)


3 responses to this post.

  1. Posted by RichardP on March 1, 2016 at 9:00 pm

    Let us know if you still feel that you are not alone anymore when you write about your bride of 40 years. That should be time enough to get a feel for whether the female can ever actually understand the male. “Being understood” a necessary part of not feeling alone. Other than that, I like your verse.


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